Monday, March 15, 2010

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You can't smell much in winter. Spring comes like a steel tornado and fills your face with all these things you forgot had scents and all of a sudden you remember last year. Or a least a feeling of last year. Or the year before that? Who knows. But your nose is no longer lonely. All of the sudden. There, like a whisper in your window, you crack it open just a touch and someone's smoke seeps in like a snake too polite to ask if he can come in, yet too curious to stay out.

12 comments:

Amy said...

Cool. Except I think snow has a distinct smell.

The Inflammable Josef said...

That was real neat! I'm not certain whether or not this is what you were aiming for, but in my opinion it sort of had a "Tom Waits" poetic vibe to it. The final quote "someone's smoke seeps in like a snake too polite to ask if he can come in, yet too curious to stay out." gave me chills. Well done, indeed!

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Alexandra said...

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Anya said...

And indeed after this i can smell the spring, see the smoke. As i read i found beautiful words crawling under my skin with a streak of a reality.

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